First comment wee

exelent work

Now onto the criticism...

The compositon is good: you capture very well the pre-war atmosphere; the light on the scene, the expressions, the poses, the number of people there (the spears show that a lot of people are involved, not only the ones whose faces are actually painted), the war banners swaying in the wind... you transmit the sense of anticipation before battle breaks onto the spectator, which is very hard to do! Congratulations There is movement in this picture, even though the figures are not moving. I think that the fact that not every tiny detail is absolutely
described (there are figures not completely sketched out etc.) contributes to this, which in my opinion is good The overall feeling of rushness in this painting (the crude paint strokes, without much blending) also reinforces the idea of battle. The painting inmediately interacts with the spectator, as the figures are looking at him/her, as if waiting.


By your comment, I'm guessing that it's not finished, right? I was going to say that the moustache man's sword looks a but strange (if it is a sword). Perhaps the lighting of this object is incorrect? It also looks too much "three dimensional", if you get my meaning. So does the object the man on his right is holding.

Otherwise, great! Keep it up

_{Sorry for the long comment} Hope this helps!

lol that one guy reminds me of juggernaut from X men

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omg. That's sick....keep going!

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You should most definitely complete this composition. It would be a show-stopping portfolio piece. I'm very happy to see your progress on this forum.

Wow, looks great. An idea for the painting would be to leave the rest like it is and focus on the large figure in the foreground holding the axe. Make that figure more defined as it's closer to the viewing point and leave the rest as is.

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maybe define the highlights and shapes of the out shapes a little more? It would seem to take away from the picture if it were left like that. =/ That's what i think

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That is one strange group... Mind blowing, nonetheless

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